The first time I read through this, I had a feeling I was missing something - then I noticed that it was part of a series *rolls eyes*. Oops. Well, I can cheerfully say that you've probably gotten me hooked onto another of your series, darn you. If only you didn't write so well, then I wouldn't become addicted to it. And I'm even more annoyed because it is a WIP. Grr.

Needless to say, this fic is tense and addictive. All of the characters are their own people, yet they retain the qualities of their Gundam Wing characters. Duo and Quatre are especially lovely. Duo is loyal and free spirited, just as he should be, whereas Quatre is impulsive yet very intelligent. I'll definitely have to investigate this series now and ignore my giant history paper and presentation...