ext_14544 ([identity profile] thejennabides.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] misanagi 2006-07-31 08:23 pm (UTC)

As soon as I started, I realized that you'd shown me parts of this chapter, too. And there's something else I think I remember, something that's coming, having to do with the arrival of Trowa and Wufei. I have an ache in my throat and behind my eyes just thinking about it (unless I made it up, which I don't think I did...).

As for this chapter: I love the care you are taking, not only with the characters but with the narrative itself, letting it unfold, letting things be revealed in their own time. As painful as the events are, the narrative itself is almost gentle - as if Heero is taking the same care in telling the story that he and the others are taking with Quatre. I hope that makes sense.

*adores*

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